Talk:The Waterfall/@comment-9953050-20140530020754/@comment-24740423-20140530025720

Brokenpaw heard a cry and  opened his eyes. He looked at the pool and saw Flame drifting in the water. Was she unconcious...? He pushed himself to his paws and slowly padded over to her location. He made an attempt to pull her out of the water, but only managed to pull her head onto shore. He hissed and nudged Nightwind roughly. "Help me pull Flame out of the water," he growled.