Talk:The Pine Copse/@comment-24257827-20140104033751

Maripaw is hunting. She was bad, REALLY bad at hunting.

Ready, set, legs, jump.

The prey run past, it's a miss.

10 minutes past, still nothing.

''I, I will just have a break for now... Maybe if I tried I could catch anything.''

20 minutes. Maripaw is sobbing under the tree.

She realised that her dream when she is a kit is hopeless, she is not Firepaw, Fireheart, or later become Firestar. She is nothing but a young, stupid apprentice.

''What should I do... ''