User blog:Spottedstar02/Narrators

So, I'm writing two books:

Shadows, a short story about a man named Alastair Pine in the small town of Ivorwood. He starts out as a normal person, but slowly degrades in many ways throughout the story, ending as the complete opposite of what he started out as. His change is caused by the world around him. I'm actually writing this one for a school contest. Does it sound good?

and

Anti, the story of an anti-social assassin and a germaphobic lawyer who happens to be her brother who live in a utopian society controlled by a marquess. She assassinates people for the marquess ,and her brother makes sure to cover her tracks. Marquess Alcott's decisions ultimately result in the decline of the society, until it becomes a fully fledged dystopia. I don't want to spoil it for you guys, so I'll shut up. :P

I really want to write these books, but I'm not sure how to. A narrator always helps in the department! So, can you comment two people/things/gods that would be good for narrating these two stories? Danke'