User blog comment:BCEngine/Two blogs in a month :D Now down to buisness... .3./@comment-25178347-20131005235720

Perfect then can you draw this scene from my songfic?

"You can't fight a mouse. You're so weak you're going to die from my next strike..." Brokensoul laughed, raising herself in order to deal as much damage to Loudclaw as possible. A slow... but very powerful... move, this could snap a spine of a lesser animal. And Loudclaw, now weakened, couldn't roll out of the way as effectively as usual... he was going to be killed.

Loudclaw was waiting for his life to end by Brokensoul's paws, now trapped by the waterfall and his own weakness. He couldn't battle any longer if he tried...

"Where's the... honor... in killing me now?" Loudclaw asked, now completely filled with desperation. He was so exhausted from this battle that he didn't even scent the new scent to his back; NightClan warriors, there to fight... but they were stopped cold by the scene that was unfolding...

"Say farewell, Loudclaw..." Brokensoul growled, preparing to deal the killing blow.

"No!"