User blog comment:Roboflight/The Nightly/@comment-5342796-20131209004108

Poetry Contest Results//Rainy
=== 1. Loud | 7 | Comments: The mood it elicited was really, really good. Excellent vocabulary. A few times I felt like the cadence/rhythm/word choice was a little off, but that's okay. Short but sweet, and an excellent winter poem. Loved it! :) === 2. Fire&Red/Gari | 6.5 | A few misspellings, I believe? And a few awkward cadences, or breaks in the flow of the poem. BUT YOU USED LINES FROM THE LION KNG 2, OMG I LOVE YOU OKAY? :D

3. Ginger | 8 | A really really cute poem. The set up was a little storylike, but I really felt for him, and I always find it great when writers use setting to convey emotion. Winter is a great backdrop for loneliness, and you employed that connotation perfectly. Well done.

4. Strike | 8.5 | Okay I SERIOUSLY loved this poem, man, it was very NightClan related. The last stanza was phenomenal, it literally gave me chills. A few mild breaks in cadence, but that happens all the time, no big.

GREAT JOB YOU GUYS! IT WAS SO HARD TO PICK, YOU HAVE NO IDEA, IF I COULD GIVE YOU ALL AN AWARD I WOULD I JUST-

kay shutting up now. But well done!