User blog comment:Heyhay01/Starlight and Cherrykits story/@comment-24317997-20130509021858

Erm, I thought this is supposed to be on a fanfiction wikia?

Well, whatever. To help you writing fanfics more, let me criticize you a bit. x3

You should get the grammar/spelling right, so that it's easier for the reader to read, and get the correct punctuation. There's no "age one" or anything, and the age goes by with "moons" (AKA months). Instead of "star clan", it should be "StarClan" and "night clan" as "NightClan".

Did I dictate too much? If so, sorry. x3