User blog comment:Shockfreeze/The Dark Forest Arises (All Hail Shadow; Magna-Fi/Crush 40)/@comment-5137480-20131007115007

Loud, I think this one was better then the other songfic. I loved the touch of a non-lyrics version. Most evil cats are different, able to get cats on their side, but I really liked how you made the rouges too afraid to ally with him. You could improve with it by adding more detail. I can see parts of this but not all. You could have done the warriors and apprentices surrounded the den, as the queens, kits, and elders probably couldn't have. It'd be cool if you mentioned who knocked him off course, though.

Overall, good!