Talk:The Stream/@comment-24495864-20130729020717/@comment-24495864-20130729023651

Bouncepaw muttered, "Mouse dung." He catiously stepped into the stream, not being able to swim well. He took another step, wanting to show that he was better than Flame. Another step; He went splashing into the water, going right into it. He flailed his paws, spluttering. As he went under again, he instantly knew that he couldn't swim. I won't make it!