User blog comment:Roboflight/The Nightly/@comment-5277627-20131208000157

Hokaaaaaaai, le scores for the poetry!

Loud: I gave you a 7, because I felt that your poem was nice. You've clearly put a lot of thought in to yours, and it's really great for the style of poem you chose. I gave you a higher mark because your poem was unique. It was something different to everyone else. I think it was a brave thing to do, Loud. I commend you for that.

Gari: I gave you a 6. Don't get me wrong, it was a good poem, but you had a couple of mistakes in it. For example:

With those who have pasted makes no sense to me. I think you meant "passed"?

Also, you missed a comma and placed one where it shouldn't have been.

''We still move on, in the brisk ice. ''I don't think there should be a comma there.

''We are one you and I.... ''There should be a comma there, before the word "one".

I would have also used a capital for the word "Clan".

It was a great poem, Gari, but it had a few mistakes.

Ginger, I gave you a 9. Your poem was excellent and touching, and really made me feel empathy for this cat. It made me feel emotions, which is what all poets should aim for. A really well done poem, Ginger. You deserve a high score for this. It's wonderful.

Strikeh, I gave you a 6. Yours was a good set out and had some emotion to it, unlike some of the other poems I read. Emotional poems are good ones. Your emotions change throughout the poem from sadness to gratitude, which was nice for the poem.

I'm sorry, I suck at reasons. :P

MY FINAL SCORES:

Loud: 7

Gari: 6

Ginger: 9

Strikeh: 6