Talk:The Stream/@comment-11587616-20140223234923/@comment-11587616-20140224000723

Firefang's head appeared over the fast-flowing water long enough to see another cat running to help him. The ginger tom tried to flail over to the stream bed again, but went underwater again. When he tried to surface again, he found himself trapped under the ice. As his vision went dark, he clawed at the half-frozen ice, trying to claw a hole through it so he could escape from the water. Firefang's vision went almost completely dark, and, with one weaker swipe of his paws, he managed to open a hole in the ice. Weakly, he dug his claws into the ice and attempted to pull himself out of the water, but failed.

The other cat that he'd seen had cautiously put a paw on the ice and was padding toward Firefang slowly so it wouldn't fall through the ice.