Talk:The Pine Copse/@comment-8754209-20130902232459/@comment-5331607-20130907212921

Ivy slashed Maplepaw's muzzle with a hiss, then raced up the tree to get a view of the battle and whether more warriors were coming. She ran out on a high branch, when the branch snapped under her. She screeched in fear as she dangled fox-lengths above the ground, slipping slowly from the branch she had caught on to.