Talk:The Alley/@comment-24317997-20131103230031

Redfang padded into the alley, looking for anything to eat. Due to the cold weather, he was searching the dark area for one, desperate attempt to find something to feed his family. Twitching his ear, he strained to hear a mouse squeak or a scuttle. Nothing.

What he didn't make out was the silent pawsteps behind him. Trodding deeper into the path, Redfang sniffed the ground. His mate, Yellowshade, was getting hungry, and his soon-to-be-born kits needed prey to survive. He swiveled his head when he heard the first noise, unsheathing his claws. Out of the darkness, a sleek black tom advanced, his venomous green eyes bright.

"Well, well, well, look what we have here," he drawled. His voice was snarky and somewhat awkward for such an elegant looking rogue. Redfang curled back his lips. "Get out of my way!" The reckless warrior swiped at the rogue, who quickly dodged the strike. "You know, I thought I'd be battling some skilled clan cat, not someone like you!" The black tom narrowed his eyes.

Redfang felt more and more agitated as the rogue went on. "Who are you, anyway?" He struggled to keep his voice calm. The black rogue tilted his head. "Why, what use would it be to you when you're about to die?" At the last word, he pounced, digging his claws into Redfang's abmoden. The warrior winced in pain, but he clumsily slashed at the black tom. Once again, he missed.

"Oh, whatever. 'Name's Phantom. And you're not going to take my prey, .... who?"

"'What use would it be to you when you're about to die?'" Redfang repeated the tom's words before bowled him to the ground. "I'm trying to feed my family and clan, and you're not going to stop me," he panted. Phantom threw the tom off. "Whatever, Tryingtofeedmyfamilyandclan." He muttered. Redfang snarled in annoyance, closing his eyes. "Shut up! That's not my na-"

He felt a sudden, immense stab near his spine, and Phantom pulled back his claws as the warrior crumpled onto the ground. The rogue narrowed his green eyes as Redfang's breathing became shallow. "Never."

Redfang fell limp, and darkness executed the remaining light in his eyes.