User blog comment:Shockfreeze/Life is a Battle (With Me, Crush 40)/@comment-24317997-20131007073128

(I'm gonna be completely honest here, okay? Okay~)

This was well written and I liked it (I actually never liked reading any Warriors fanfics because I'm just not into Warriors anymore but this is good).

The battle is fairly well written, and although I've read a few better fanfics with battle scenes that are NOT related to Warriors, this is probably the best Warriors battle scene fanfic I've read. There's no "hero saves the day" plot -thankfully- and the ending feels like an open-to-the-reader ending. I like that~ You captured the cats personalities almost perfectly (I dont really know Brokensoul but I suppose shes supposed to be that insane sort of cat, and shes mad here). It's descriptive (although I wish there was more blood in it, haha) and suspenseful, and a nice use of words.

However, in my opinion, I'm not a fan of too many "..."s in a fanfiction, and even though it gives a nice suspenseful edge to the story, I just don't really like it when it's used over five times. I also don't really like Warriors as much as I used to, too, which is another reason why I didn't actually quite enjoy it to the max.

Overall, 9/10 stars~ Good job~